Reflection of narrative

This narritve is the first of all papers that I had to write in college. In a way i feel like i didn't do that great of a job. My paper did have many erros that i had not caught. The setup of the paper was also a little bit different then what was expected. I did not put enough time. As time went on though a lot of those mistakes were fixed and the only issue left by the 2nd draft was that i still did not fix the setup. I still need to so that it can do more explaining about how i changed as a person rather than the events. I guess i thought i had it down but events seemed to story like. Now for my final draft i may have to rewrite all of it so that it can be in a more different form than before. This paper was really different than other papers i have ever wrote since i had to tell how i changed with some major event. I didn't try hard enought and will try even harder on the final draft to put the events on the right track